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Feb 02: Egg (loosely)

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5-7-5
six flavours of Spring
dance along the budding branch;
life begins anew



No 5-7-5
Spring
dances along the branch;
life begins
Based very losely on the egg prompt, this is my second day's haiku. I did both 5-7-5 and no 5-7-5 on this one, as I'm still not sure which one I prefer.
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