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there is nothing of wholeness
left of me
but you have built gods of fluids
spit from unkind oceans
and sweet only in comparison
and you have swallowed past rocks
lodged like mountains
and you have counted the curves
of my intentions
good-good-good, oh-
that one. (well, you know
nobody's perfect)
and you have breathed beauty
into stubby shards
and leavings
left of me
but you have built gods of fluids
spit from unkind oceans
and sweet only in comparison
and you have swallowed past rocks
lodged like mountains
and you have counted the curves
of my intentions
good-good-good, oh-
that one. (well, you know
nobody's perfect)
and you have breathed beauty
into stubby shards
and leavings
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Everybody's being so nice to me lately (it's tearing me apart).
"Stubby" is a reference both to little awkward pieces, and to the Aussie term for a beer bottle.
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"Stubby" is a reference both to little awkward pieces, and to the Aussie term for a beer bottle.
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dA love for everyone! #83
As the title suggests, this news article’s goal is to spread the dA love into everyone’s heart! You will find here a little bit of everything, from awesome interviews with talented artists, art features, group promotion to random deviants' features. I hope you will find this informative and entertaining!
Interviewed artist: =jjpeabody :iconjjpeabody:Tell us what defines you as a person.
I use creativity in my everyday life to adapt and overcome obstacles that I face. I believe this defines me as a person as I apply this in almost every situation that I encounter.
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found you from another page. love this! and you have swallowed past rocks lodged like mountains. gives new meaning to a lump in the throat. taking your medicine if you know what's good for you and other metaphors. great write!