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The sky-eye beats down over us, a harsh reminder that summer in this country is cruel. There are no lush hills, only red dust our feet mark lightly. Sometimes it feels like we've been marching forever, the glare of the sky-eye a truth as heavy and immoveable as a fallen tree. We march, stopping for sustenance as it is needed; a drink here, or the remains of a deceased animal there. Our own supplies have long since been used up and we are forced to rely on the land’s meagre offerings. It is hot, it is dry, and it is hungry work, but it is necessary.

We are still marching when a whisper hisses its way through the columns. A few folk stumble, but the march doesn't halt, and they quickly regain their rightful place. Still, there is a sense of excitement now, spreading through our ranks. 'Food,' the whisper goes. 'C. A. Harland, this month's Forward Scout, has spotted a feast ahead.' It will take many more movements of the sky-eye before we reach it, but the mere thought of replenishing our supplies with something other than desert scavenging has all our mouths watering.

Time passes more quickly, now that we have something to look forward to; and folk begin to talk amongst themselves as we march. No longer are our columns silent, forward focused and single-minded, and chatter drifts from topic to topic. Old folk tales are shared anew, alight again with the fire of enthusiasm long forgotten. Stories have a way of replicating themselves, and my family has been telling my great-great-great-great-great (and probably a few more –greats in there, too) Uncle Pappy’s version of the Great Invasion for so long his voice is an echo within each of our Elders’.

It has always been my favourite. Pappy says his army followed a half-giant (seas flooding from his eyes, and voice booming slow, thick words) through to the village, sending the full and half-giant creatures fleeing before them. After only a few sky-eye passes, they had fully reclaimed what had belonged to our world and the giants did not return.

**

When we finally make it to our destination, the sky-eye sleeps and his sister watches the world. She does not flinch or make warnings as we move cautiously forward, only winks silently down. Two giants boom words at each other.

Our columns break apart in planned formation, and we step forth onto terrain that clutches at our feet even as we walk across it. The sight and smell of food is everywhere, huge castles of it towering over us in piles and spires. Seasoned warriors dart here and there, gathering provisions, while younger soldiers consume their fill. Still, the words of the Elders echo over us, reminders to avoid the white grains of delight – a heady drug that attacks with euphoria followed closely by body-deep exhaustion. I am just thinking this, scurrying to safety, when we are spotted. A giant booms and the world moves.

“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANTS!”
Day 4 of FFM. Apparently they're amping up the challenges this year, because today's is an absolute doozy.


Elements:
  • 500 words
  • Include the name of someone who was in the chat when you joined: C-A-Harland
  • Refer to one of the stories written on this day in 2009: Different At Home
  • Use a prompt from the 2010 prompt bank: "Ants at a picnic, from the perspective of the ants" added by SpearHawk
  • Include a reference to Ed's assku: "lush hills"
  • Utilise one of day 31's challenge options from last year: Your piece must prominently feature summertime, because that is the time sacred to Hydra.
  • Include an important choice and/or drugs of some description: Sugar (although neither prescription nor illegal, sugar is technically a drug).


I have nothing further to say. Give some love to Different At Home, and then go read all the other pieces posted for today, and commiserate with those of us crazy enough to take on the Red Pill challenge:

Different At Home“They’re coming!” Duranjaya screamed as he came running out of the jungle. The little Indian boy was in tears. I walked down from the terrace towards him as fast as I could in a colonial gown. I had feared this moment, if this truly was the moment that I had expected.
“Duran! Duran, tell me! Who’s coming? Is it the Tamils?” If it was, my fears would’ve become reality. The plantation would have to be evacuated, fast. The Tamil rebellion had been going on for weeks now, and they were coming closer every time we heard something about them. Two bordering plantations had already been pillaged and burnt to the ground.
“No, it’s the ants!” He was crying. I felt relieved, it wasn’t so bad after all. Ants, just ants. I mean, how bad could it be? Granted, the ants were a bit bigger here than they were back in England, but they were hardly elephant-sized. An ant stampede was hardly frightening. An old servant appeared from the woods in the bo
FFM Links - 4 July 2015Welcome, once again, to Flash Fiction Month 2015!  It's day four, and you're starting to get smug.  "Oh this isn't nearly as bad as last year," you may be saying to yourself.  But the Hydra hears you, and we're throwing you down the rabbit hole today.  Hope you're ready for some adventure!
VIVA!!
Flash Fiction Month is about writing – and posting – a story of between 55 and 1000 words in length every day for the month of July.  We’ll make it easy by posting prompts every day.  We’ll make it fun by cheering each other on.  We’ll make it ridiculously hard by posting challenges for you to attempt every couple of days.
Today is one of those 'super hard' CHALLENGE days, but this one comes with a twist that may even throw some of the old FFM'ers for a loop.  Not because the challenge itself is so mindbending, but because WE'RE NOT GOING TO TELL YOU WHAT IT IS.  Intrigued?

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SCFrankles's avatar
A great ending ^^